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man or woman still on their feet


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All right Aspiring t people alright Survival instincts on tv

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Here we go man or woman still on their feet

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How awkward is that Art were in paragraph to the

00:15

original survival reality show probably titled survivors Actually a fierce

00:18

competition Many rules may twist Sent to a remote location

00:21

they must find their food water shelter and a community

00:23

free physical challenges The challenge winners receive prices like food

00:28

or immunity from being voted off the show The last

00:32

man or woman still on their feet receives a one

00:37

million dollar payout It's like a robot broke that and

00:40

not very well Well the expression last man standing on

00:48

gender bias aside generally first to the winner of a

00:51

challenge who has eliminated or defeated everyone else literally the

00:54

last dude standing like physically standing while everyone else is

00:58

prone on the floor sitting in chairs or something Well

01:01

in this end of the idiomatic expression perfectly describes what

01:04

the winner of survivor receives Ah big fat paycheck Yeah

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and a side note here Last man standing also has

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a nicely victorious hunger games esque ring to it whereas

01:15

the literal interpretation could very well mean that the last

01:18

man standing will just lost it You know musical chairs

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alright well has its written The phrase is awkward and

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uses their to refer to man or woman when the

01:29

correct pronoun should be his or her well run subject

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of their their spelled t h e r e is

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an incorrect pronoun as well Like indeed it's not the

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last person there wins Like the location they're wins the

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million dollar prize It's the person who remains after all

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other competitors have bean vanquished way get closer to the

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correct answer by describing the winner is someone who's still

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a participating in the game But that phrase is still

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not as precise as it should be instead of the

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last man or woman standing as in b So it

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should read The last man or woman standing received a

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million dollar payout and that's it maura she looked out

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