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ACT English 1.1 Sentence Structure
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ACT English: Sentence Structure Drill 1, Problem 1. Properly punctuating dependent clauses. 

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ACT English: Sentence Structure Drill 1, Problem 2. What punctuation do we need between these clauses?

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ACT English: Sentence Structure Drill 1, Problem 3. Proper word choice for independent clauses.

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ACT English: Passage Drill Drill 2, Problem 4. Which tense works the best in this sentence?

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Here’s your Shmoop du jour, brought to you by the great cookie-making disaster of 2014.

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How would you correct the following underlined portion from the passage? Does it need correcting?

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was making

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And here are the potential answers...

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Looks like it’s time once again to play “Name that Tense.”

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Let’s get choice (B) out of our faces first of all. The verb “made” is in the simple

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past tense, which signals that the baking had already ended by the time the car backfired.

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(C) gives us the past perfect tense with “had made.” The past perfect indicates that something

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happened before something else in the past, which is mostly the case here.

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However, past perfect also implies that an action occurred in the distant past.

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Because the writer says these things happened yesterday, we can eliminate choice (C).

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Choice (D) offers “had been making,” which is in the past perfect continuous.

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This tense signals that something happened before another event in the past and continued on

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until that event interrupted it. This makes some sense here as well, but we can ultimately eliminate

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(D) for the same reason we nixed (C). The helping verb “have” implies the distant

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past, and this event occurred “yesterday.”

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The correct answer is (A), which uses the past continuous tense with “was making.”

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The past continuous signals an action that was occurring in the recent past, but was

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then interrupted by something in the simple past. This is totally what we’re looking

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for here, since the writer was in the middle of baking yesterday, when she heard the car backfire.

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Will she ever bake again?

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