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CAHSEE ELA 4.2 Writing Strategies. Which of the following sentences would be the best to add to the end of the draft?

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Hurry and here's your smoke to use your brought to

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you by stillness It took forever to arrive All right

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check out the following passage Yeah Which of the following

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sentences would be the best to add to the end

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of the draft and hear the potential answers Well the

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paragraph currently ends with the sentence she hoped that the

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short rest would be enough Sounds pretty good to us

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but we'll give all the answer options a chance to

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impress us before we start making cuts There's no way

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we're signing off on choice B by this point in

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the paragraph were already well aware that the character's life

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is fatiguing or tiring We're told early in the second

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paragraph ordinarily she was as frantic and busy as a

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city in rush hour and the whole passages about her

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needing a break from her stressful life for her So

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if the author ended the paragraph with choice be it'd

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be total overkill Like trying to kill a fly with

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a wrecking ball is just too much ass miley cyrus

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choice is wrong for the same reason Is b she's

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tired We get it already Can we move on place

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We swear if the next answer says anything about oh

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great Look at joyce See Alright this question is trying

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to fake us out by making most of the answer

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similar it's hoping will be impressed by sheer volume and

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assume that some version of this idea must be right

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but we know that bigger isn't always better right guys

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you know like a swollen foot For example Any last

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line that talks about how the girl is tired is

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just plain force It seems we should have gone with

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our gut from the beginning The correct answer is the

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the best thing about current ending is that it leaves

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us guessing we're left to wonder whether the girls break

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will be enough and it makes sense and the peace

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with little mystery is the whole essay is kind of

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the serious Throughout we ask ourselves who is she Where

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is she what's up with her life that it's so

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busy And of course there is the most important question

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of all Why were the frogs also taking breaks pretty

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seriously like what could be stressful about being a fraud 00:02:03.01 --> [endTime] Oh we know snakes no really

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