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ACT Reading 1.1 Prose Fiction
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ACT Reading Prose Fiction Drill 1, Problem 1. Which of the following best describes the overall purpose of this passage?

ACT Reading 1.4 Prose Fiction
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ACT Reading Prose Fiction Drill 1, Problem 4. How does the narrator feel about the prediction made at his birth that he would have the ability...

AP English Language and Composition 1.1 Comprehension
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AP® English Language and Composition: Comprehension Drill 1, Problem 1. The speaker would agree with all of the following statements except what?

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Texas EOC English 1: 1.3 Editing 255 Views


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Sorry And here's your shmoop du jour brought to you

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by pablo picasso He once did a police sketch of

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a burglar and they arrested a nun a politician a

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washing machine and the eiffel tower You know it wasn't

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pretty I got fired from that job Sorry All right

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we'll check out the following passage again At least thank

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you for writing this that we have to read it

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eighty seven times Wear done and we're skimming And well

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guess what we're done What change needs to be made

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to sentence three And here the potential answers just come

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up with something all right Alisa is at it again

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in sentence number three and here people are proportionate landscapes

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contained discernible mountains trees or ocean All right well let's

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See if we can get the grammar police at bay

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Our lives would be a lot easier if choice d

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were correct If no change were necessary we could take

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the time we're about to spend on this and go

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on candy bar Something like that But sadly that's not

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case onward and upward shmoop er's Yeah option a isn't

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going to fix what's wrong with this sense at all

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It wouldn't be grammatically incorrect to change proportionate to proportioned

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but there's no need to do it In fact it

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might suddenly change the meaning of at least a sentence

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And we know how grumpy at least gets when her

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senses are unclear Pretty grumpy joyce e is a terrible

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option for one There are two commas in this sense

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and we have no idea what comma option c is

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talking about And anyway it's going to take more than

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removing akama to get this sentence on the right track

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well he is the one and only answer The problem

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here is that the sentence contains a comus place We've

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got two independent clauses each with its own subject and

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verb that are connected with nothing more than a measly

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comma right there Sorry but a comment just doesn't have

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what it takes Check it in the first clause people

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is the subject and our is the verb while in

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the second clause landscapes is the subject and contain is

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the verb right there So there you go two totally

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independent clauses spliced together with a puny comma lucky for

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release This is an easy problem to fix All we

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have to do is follow these advice and blew these

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clauses together with a semi call on instead of that

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measly comma we like to think of commas as the

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common classroom strength glue of the punctuation world Semi colons 00:02:24.885 --> [endTime] No they're more like duct tape in your brain

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