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ACT English: Style Drill 1, Problem 1. Does the underlined portion match the style?

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ACT English: Style Drill 1, Problem 2. Which of the choices best matches the tone of the passage?

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Here's your Shmoop du jour, brought to you by the flip-flop.

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Good for beachgoers, bad for politicians.

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How would you correct the underlined portion below, if at all?

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My brother always tries to scare me at Halloween by jumping out of the bushes.

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Without a shadow of a doubt, this year would be no different.

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Here are the potential answers...

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Here, the first-person point of view and informal language give this passage a casual tone.

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The subject matter also makes the whole thing seem relaxed; it's hard to sound super-formal

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if we're talking about our brother jumping out of bushes to scare us at Halloween.

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My, word!

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Anyway, it's like the sentences are wearing shorts and flip-flops, and we've got to

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find an answer that's equally as casual.

00:52

Both (B) and (C) are definitely not wearing flip-flops.

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The words "indubitably" and "incontestable" are about as formal as it gets.

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Plunking either of these answer choices into the underlined portion would be like

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wearing wingtips on the beach.

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The original sentence uses the phrase, without a shadow of a doubt,

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which is a fairly well known idiom.

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Of course, while it's not totally formal, it's not the sort of thing that people

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would say in everyday speech, at least not in the modern era.

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It's sort of like somebody going to the beach wearing, one flip-flop and one wingtip.

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We're going for the full flip-flop style, here, so we can nix choice (A).

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Choice (D) is the right answer because "naturally" is the most casual of the answer choices.

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We're actually thinking about trying this one flip-flop, one wingtip style.

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We hear it's the hottest new hipster fad.

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