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SAT Writing & Language: Sentence Transitions at the Beginning of an Essay
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SAT Writing and Language Drill 2.3 Organization
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Did Washington ever get lonely? Watch this SAT Writing video on solitude to find out.

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Did Washington ever get lonely? Watch this SAT Writing video on solitude to find out.


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All right jumpers continuing on your track to become an

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editor working for shmoop up with the question Three of

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eleven This prep thing Question to make information flow most

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smoothly Where should send three go Okay Well where does

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it go Where should it go So let's go down

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to sentence three Their sexuality Would we come often during

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his presidency Okay Well let's See we're thinking aloud here

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because sentenced three starts with such solitude We know it's

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referring to a solitude That's already been mentioned But where

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do we see solitude in sentence One or two missing

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sentence six describes washington waiting alone for hours on end

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Which sounds like solitude to us So sticking sentence three

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right after sentence six and it's Probably the best bet

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Then it relates directly behind it You know what it's

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referring teo And you can feel sorry for old george

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there while sentence three interrupts the flow of the paragraph

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in every other location too So it's got to get

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out of there so we know it ain't a when

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placed at the beginning it awkwardly leads into a sentence

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that just doesn't relate well Senses foreign five both described

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washington doing something on his own but they don't emphasize

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solitude in the same way A sentence Six So the

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answer is d there right there after sentence six and 00:01:18.003 --> [endTime] we're done

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